The Painting of Home

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an offering, a gift for one far away
a little piece of home to warm you
to let you know I understand
you had to go, you wanted to leave

a little piece of home to warm you
for where you live now is often cold but
you had to go, you wanted to leave
it was I that gave you your wings

for where you live is often cold but
you had to go, you wanted to leave
it was I that gave you your wings
an offering, a gift for one far away

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Reena’s prompt: Pantoum

This week, I invite you to explore the music of repetition by writing a pantoum on any theme or subject.

A pantoum unfolds in four-line stanzas, with each stanza carrying two lines into the next:

  • The second line becomes the first line of the next stanza.
  • The fourth line becomes the third line of the next stanza.
  • Add new lines in the second and fourth positions, letting the repeated lines gather fresh meaning in their new surroundings.

Continue for as many stanzas as you like. To bring the poem full circle, the final stanza traditionally uses the opening stanza’s third line as its second line, and the poem’s opening line as its closing line.

W3 Prompt #228: Wea’ve Written Weekly
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