Senryu
you bearded, woolly
coconut-nosed palm trees are
hov’ring over me
Haiku
clear skies paradise
palm fronds ripple in the breeze
laying on the sand
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Susi’s challenge:
Please create one senryu and one haiku to accompany this image prompt. Remember that traditional American haikus and senryus consist of three lines in a 5-7-5 syllabic pattern. The haiku describes nature or a season, and the senryu focuses on human nature and emotions.
Beautiful 😍
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Thank you so much, Sadje
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You’re most welcome 🤗
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Yep, that would be me too, laying in the sand! 🙂 Lovely pieces, Lisa!
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