life goes round, showcased the same view, the
same day, familiar comfort-
tentacles attached me- to routine;
life begins outside my view
gather all my strength to take the jump
to the great unknown

All photographs property of © Paul Szlosek
This is my first attempt to write a sijo.
©2025 Lisa Paul
Selma invites participants to Tanka Tuesday, encouraging them to select a photo from Paul Szlosek’s website for inspiration in writing syllabic poetry. Credit Paul when using his images, and enjoy the creative process.
Nicely done, Lisa we never quite know what life holds do we? 😉
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No, we do not ❣️ thank you!
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Nicely done Lisa x
You never know until you try 🤗 and often you will surprise yourself.
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Yes, you are right! Thank you 🥰
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My pleasure always🥰
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This is a beautiful poem Lisa
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Thank you so much, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Lisa Paul, this is just beautiful. Thanks for joining with this lovely Sijo. Blessings.
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Thank you very much ☺️
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Creative poem for that photo, Lisa! I love it!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Life is full of surprises, isn’t it? Well done, Lisa! 🌞
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You are so right! Thank you xoxo
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Well done, Lisa. New adventures are what makes life interesting.
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You are so right. Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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Ferris Wheels seem pretty harmless. My brother needed a Xanax to ride on one. He didn’t get one, and I thought he was going to crawl down to the floor. But he didn’t, solving the problem by pretending to be Superman.
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Lol! What a smart guy!!
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What a a great descriptive poem Lisa🙌
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Thank you!
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hi Lisa everyday is a leap of faith 💜💜😊
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You are so right ❤️
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💜💜💜👍
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Nicely done, Lisa. Make sure to use the syllabic forms. Here’s the syllable counter I use: https://syllablecounter.net/. 💜
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Thank you, I will use that.
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You’re welcome. Email me if you need help. 💜
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I guess I don’t understand. I thought I had the syllables perfect for a sijo
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Nope, you did. It was me. I didn’t count the syllables correctly. I apologize. It helps me if you add the form you’re creating. I’m sorry. I had too much on my plate. 💜
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It is perfectly alright. 🩷
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I like how the poem states the usual and then moves to the possible, hope.
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Thank you 😊
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Welcome Lisa ❤️
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