Quiet,
softly falling snowflakes cover
the fields, create a wonderland of
sparkling white, sound absent as
a blanket over your head, the
countryside transformed, then
red
the shocking plume of a
cardinal against the snow and
he takes flight through
falling stars so
silent

Copyright ©2025 Lisa Paul
Created for Wea’ve Written Weekly, Jaideep’s is the host. His prompt guidelines:
- Write a poem that starts and ends in silence.
- The first and last lines should directly evoke or describe silence.
- It could be the literal word silence, or imagery that suggests quietness, stillness, or absence of sound.
- The point is to frame the whole poem between two moments of silence.
- Use enjambment to sound like a heartbeat.
- Enjambment means carrying a sentence or phrase over from one line to the next without a pause.
- The short, broken flow can mimic a heartbeat: steady, pulsing, slightly uneven.
- Think of each line as a “beat” that pushes into the next one.
- Keep it to 12 lines, like 12 heartbeats.
- The entire poem is only 12 lines long.
- Each line equals one “pulse,” so the poem itself becomes a heartbeat sequence.
- The brevity forces intensity and rhythm.
- At least once, use a one-word line that makes the reader pause.
- Somewhere in the poem, have a line with only one word.
- This acts like a pause or a sudden strong beat in the rhythm, making the reader stop and notice.
- That single word should carry weight—emotionally, visually, or sonically.