Falling Stars

Quiet,
softly falling snowflakes cover
the fields, create a wonderland of
sparkling white, sound absent as
a blanket over your head, the
countryside transformed, then
red
the shocking plume of a
cardinal against the snow and
he takes flight through
falling stars so
silent

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Created for Wea’ve Written Weekly, Jaideep’s is the host. His prompt guidelines:

  1. Write a poem that starts and ends in silence.
    • The first and last lines should directly evoke or describe silence.
    • It could be the literal word silence, or imagery that suggests quietness, stillness, or absence of sound.
    • The point is to frame the whole poem between two moments of silence.
  2. Use enjambment to sound like a heartbeat.
    • Enjambment means carrying a sentence or phrase over from one line to the next without a pause.
    • The short, broken flow can mimic a heartbeat: steady, pulsing, slightly uneven.
    • Think of each line as a “beat” that pushes into the next one.
  3. Keep it to 12 lines, like 12 heartbeats.
    • The entire poem is only 12 lines long.
    • Each line equals one “pulse,” so the poem itself becomes a heartbeat sequence.
    • The brevity forces intensity and rhythm.
  4. At least once, use a one-word line that makes the reader pause.
    • Somewhere in the poem, have a line with only one word.
    • This acts like a pause or a sudden strong beat in the rhythm, making the reader stop and notice.
    • That single word should carry weight—emotionally, visually, or sonically.