the boat motor growls
and gurgles as we move on
the choppy water – we bounce –
the boat pops, groans
as we race around the bend

Photo by Lisa Paul
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Hi, this is Robbie, your host for this week’s #TankaTuesday challenge. This week, we’re writing poetry that includes onomatopoeia.
Onomatopoeia is a type of word, or the process of creating a word, that phonetically imitates, resembles, or suggests a sound that it refers to. Some examples are crash, bang, squeal, etc.
This week, I’m asking you to write a syllabic poem in any of the forms listed on this site using at least one onomatopoeia.
Awesome photo and poem, Lisa! I remember enjoying that kind of fun once upon a time. Lol!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you so much!
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Fun! 💞
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Thank you!
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Ah, reminders of glorious times for me – although once, with friends, their boat groaned and cut, we were five kms off shore and they had no flares etc. We drained the motor and all turned out well, I love the sounds you’ve evoked for me.
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I’m so glad! Thank you, Paul.
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It looks like you had a ton of fun, Lisa! 💟
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Thank you, Colleen, we did ☺️
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