stars glittered
I shook from the cold
fearful shakes
soft lips touched
I smelled frost, leather, your skin
warmth spread from within

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Nancy’s prompt: Shadorma
This week, let’s write shadorma poems.
The shadorma is a compact Spanish syllabic form built from a six-line stanza with a strict syllable pattern: 3 / 5 / 3 / 3 / 7 / 5 (26 syllables total). It is typically unrhymed, and a poem may consist of a single stanza or a series of stanzas.
For this challenge, the theme is Sensory Details.
Write a close-up study of a single inanimate object or a very specific moment. Think small and focused rather than narrative or expansive. The power of the poem should come from sensory observation—what can be seen, heard, touched, smelled, or felt.
The key is to capture one concentrated moment through vivid sensory detail.
Lisa this is a luscious moment painted so beautifully- sensual and tactile – love it 🩷
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Thank you! That means so much ☺️
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♥️
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Beautiful, Lisa.
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Thank you so much, Lesley.
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Really love this Lisa ❤️
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Thank you, Maggie 😊
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Beautiful poem, Lisa! I love how you split the shadorma into two stanzas.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you very much, Yvette.
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That is one of the best feelings life has to offer.
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So true!
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Aww… beautiful. ❤️❤️
I loved this, Lisa.
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Thank you kindly, Nigel ☺️
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Lisa, there’s no feeling quite like that first kiss. Beautiful description. I love this poem. Thank you for participating.
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It really is an incredible moment, you are so right! Thank you 💕
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Lisa, the line “I smelled frost, leather, your skin” feels vivid and close, like the whole moment is held in that single breath…
~David
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Yes, it really was. Thank you, David.
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*hug*
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