Like the planets caught
in their well ordered patterns around the sun
we used to string the lights
around the tree –
you – fumbling and trying not to curse,
me -turning my head away to silently laugh.
Ornaments old, ugly or cherished,
dangled, reflecting the lights,
and whispering a story of creation,
of origin, of pudgy fingers that crafted
or hands that offered their gift like a treasure.
I think there is a universe swirling
around Christmas trees,
a universe filled with warm memories
and bright excitement,
tears of loss and joy-filled love.

Copyright ©2025 Lisa Paul. All rights reserved.
Indira is the host of W3 Prompt. Her challenge:
This week, write a poem on any subject, but give it a comic touch (no pathos this round).
Have fun with it!
You know it wasn’t until the end that I really felt that you hit the nail on the head. I have lost so many people in such a short span of time that sometimes it just seems easier to leave the tree in the box. There is so much joy in the memories but the pain is awful.
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Amen, my friend. Thank you for your thoughtful comment, and I am sending love to you. The pain is real, and some can’t understand. May we both give ourselves as much grace as we need.❤️💔❤️
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If I were to imagine- this would be exactly what I would imagine your tree contained- wonderful memories one and all. I loved this.
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Thank you, dear Violet! 💚🌲
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Thanks for reminding me that it is time to decorate with your poem.
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You are welcome! 🤗
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What a beautiful poem Lisa, wonderful memories tinged with sadness❤️
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Thank you so much, Ange ❤️
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Lisa, I loved the description of the tree decorated with memories!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome!!
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Lisa, this feels like its own small universe. I love how “pudgy fingers” and old ornaments carry both joy and loss in the same light.
~David
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Thank you so much, David ☺️💙
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hi, Lisa❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Violet Lentz, is now live:
Much love,
David
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Thank you!!💙
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*hug!*
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