Undulating Light

lisaapaul Uncategorized October 4, 2025October 7, 2025 1 Minute

bright light dances with
quiet, dark parts of my heart
and shining hope leads

undulating light
illuminates rocky depths
of upside down world

Susi of SenHai Saturday challenges us: Please create one senryu and one haiku to accompany this image prompt. Remember that a traditional haiku describes nature or a season, while a senryu focuses on human nature and emotions.

SenHai Saturday #20

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Published October 4, 2025October 7, 2025

8 thoughts on “Undulating Light”

Susi Bocks says:

October 7, 2025 at 8:16 pm

I love how you’ve presented the two. While both focus on the light, there is an alluding to the darkness as well. Well done, Lisa!

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1. lisaapaul says:
  
  October 7, 2025 at 9:03 pm
  
  Thank you so much, Susi ✨🩵✨
  
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  1. Susi Bocks says:
    
    October 8, 2025 at 12:22 am
    
    You’re very welcome, dear! ❤
    
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Violet Lentz says:

October 9, 2025 at 7:30 am

I love the word undulating- you did a great job of working it in perfectly here!

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1. lisaapaul says:
  
  October 9, 2025 at 8:19 pm
  
  Thank you!! ✨🤍✨
  
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Erwinism says:

October 12, 2025 at 5:02 pm

The cadence to this is beautiful, my friend, with a stunning image to match.

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1. lisaapaul says:
  
  October 12, 2025 at 7:53 pm
  
  Thank you so much! 💫🩵💫
  
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