Darkening days die
with a sigh of stirring leaves
pumpkin and crimson
traveling on autumn wind
dancing for the harvest moon

image created by me and Gemini
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Featured Kigo: Autumn grasses, the seven flowers of autumn, quail, dew, traveling, journeys, new beginnings, back to school, darkening days, autumn sunsets, autumn vigor, crows, ripening fruits, mushrooms, grapes, the harvest moon, horse chestnuts, roadside flowers of cosmos and goldenrod. Respect for the aged day. Bilbo Baggins’s and Frodo’s birthday, and grapes.
Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday Challenge:
Choose from the White Dew (September 7 – 22) Hakuro 白露 kigo words or phrases (above) and write a syllabic poem. You must use the kigo word or phase in your poem. If you write a freestyle poem, you must include a syllabic form with it.
A lovely tanka celebrating dancing leaves.
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Thank you so much!
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Awesome scene
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Thank you very much!
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What a lovely tanka. Leaves dancing under the full moon is magical! ☮️
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Thank you, Colleen ✨💞✨
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You’re welcome, Lisa. ☮️
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Gorgeous poem, Lisa!
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Thank you very much! 💫🧡
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You took me there Lisa, the colours, feel and sounds.
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Thank you so very much! ✨🧡✨❤️
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