Desire was the fire that burned the body and possessed the mind
Desire was the siren call of forbidden pleasure
that will consume the will and pull you into darkness
Desire was a feast, a thirst for understanding and a devouring
of knowledge or a yearning to speak and connect spirit to spirit
Desire was the North Star we followed, dotting the darkness with light.
Copyright ©2025 Lisa Paul
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Merrill is hosting MTB and challenges us to write a Cherita
I like the way you characterize desire here, Lisa.
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Thank you so much, Li ☺️
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You’re very welcome.
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I like the way desire is both siren and beacon, and though it could be darkness, it seems that it’s not at the end. Thank you for writing to the prompt!
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Thank you so much for such a challenging prompt and for your kind words ☺️
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You’re welcome! 😊
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Ooh, yummy ! I feel the passion tingling in me.
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Thank you so much! 🙏😊
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Lisa, “Desire was the North Star we followed” feels like such a perfect closing — it leaves me with this sense of being guided even through the pull of its fire.
~David
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Thank you, David, that is what I was going for. ☺️
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Love the conclusion with the light of passion guiding
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Thank you! 🙏☺️
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Whew! That was nice! Great write, Lisa.
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Thank you so much, Violet ❤️
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Perfection: We should all be so fortunate to have experienced this at least once in our lifetimes.f
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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