November snow, but I have to go
down roads of ice and it isn’t nice
to slip when I stop and slide when I go,
everyone creeping and time is still leaping
and I’m late again and I don’t know when
or if I cared ’cause I’m not prepared
to enter the winter, too cold and too bitter,
an awful old thing, I’d sleep until Spring.

Copyright ©2025 Lisa Paul
Shaun’s prompt guidelines
I’m generally a rhymer having long been a lyricist but do like experimentation too. In these busy times I’m also a fan of brevity. So for today’s prompt let’s try a poem that utilises internal rhyme where possible and keep the length between 8 and 16 lines.
I’m glad that I don’t have to contend with snow anymore.
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I envy you! No one was prepared for snow this early, so the roads weren’t prepped or plowed and it was ice and snow, so we had a mess!
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All these years of weather science and forecasting don’t seem to have amounted to much! Haha!
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Love this Lisa ❤️
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Thank you, Maggie! I made it to work and was grateful, even if I was late ☺️
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Be safe Lisa 💙
Hugs 🫂
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Very nice Lisa and I can’t agree more…snow can be tricky to deal with!
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Yes, it is for me! I just drive slowlyyyy ☺️
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Needless to say driving in snow is just part of living in Alaska- and I have no problem with the snow- it is the crazy drivers that have yet to learn to respect the elements that make me crazy.
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I agree! Thankfully everyone really was creeping that morning. Way less stress…
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Sleeping until spring sounds like an excellent idea when winter arrives in full force! (K)
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I agree, I sometimes wish we really could!
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Lisa, hibernation is on my mind and you painted it with internal rhyme!! Well done poet!!
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Yes, I also wish hibernation was an option! Thank you! 😊
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As I’m retired it IS and option! If we get lots of snow, I’ll just stay in and nap all day!! (and maybe write poetry!)
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Fab poem Lisa – the internal rhyme comes so naturally to you 🙌
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Thank you for your kind words!
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You are welcome ❤️
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Gorgeous poetry. A subtle genius in many of those lines.👌
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Thank you so much for your kind words! ✨🤍✨
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Pleasure.
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Lisa, “I’d sleep until Spring” really lands for me — it captures that cold dread perfectly.
~David
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I am not sure why, but I just saw this comment. Thank you, David!
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🤗 🤗 🤗
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hi, Lisa❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Dennis, is now live:
Much love,
David
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Thank you, David ❤️
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*hug!*
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hi, Lisa❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Ange, is now live:
Much love,
David
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