a sea
of green grass sways
tall waves of ocean roll
the breeze will touch with tender hand
each blade
Copyright©2025 Lisa Paul
I have attempted to write a Cinquain poem in response to this challenge
Waves
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a sea
of green grass sways
tall waves of ocean roll
the breeze will touch with tender hand
each blade
Copyright©2025 Lisa Paul
I have attempted to write a Cinquain poem in response to this challenge
A Little Bit of Everything, With Love 
A perfect use of metaphors that paint a vivid picture. I like it.
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful poem, Lisa!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you!
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This is beautiful writing. Lisa. Emotive, and alive. 💕
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Thank you so very much
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Beautiful use of metaphor ☺️
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Thank you 😊
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Lovely, Lisa. 💛
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Thank you!
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Eloquently rendered.
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Thank you, Melissa!
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This is a beautiful extended metaphor.
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Thank you so very much!
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This is beautiful, Lisa. I like how you compared the green grass to the sea. It’s a wonderful comparison. 💜
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Thank you so much!
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I love how you create those powerful images through metaphor.
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Thank you so much!
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So beautiful and restful 💜💜💜
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Thank you so much! 😊
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