You are like a baby’s rattle,
Full of color and tinkling sound.
Eyes are drawn to you, irresistible,
Because, suddenly, we have found
A life without your spirit or one without your fire,
A life without you near is nothing we desire.
Written in response to GirlieOnTheEdge Six Sentence Story
A Little Bit of Everything, With Love 
Nicely done!
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What V said (above).
This because, while I appreciate poetry, all I can do is hear the melody, as in the distance. Regrettably have no sense of how it is that everyday words can transform each other, simply by the author getting all fourth-grade teacher on ’em (“No, Tommy, you get over two and let Pauline stand in front of Sally…”) lol sorry sometimes I do this in Comments
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Good description of the baby rattles that we find irresistible.
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Thank you very much.
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She sounds nice!
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Very nice. We should all have such a “rattle” 😊
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We are drawn to those pretty baubles, aren’t we.
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Yes, we are
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